Images shown for the Crit
Notes taken from the Crit:
Variety of lines and mark making that engages the interest
Large fluid strokes, short marks, long marks, drippy marks, big swirls
Remind of under the sea
Tree of life – following it through time
Relationship between up and down and left and right flows to the next one
Movement is lovely, as if it’s alive and is moving
Because it isn’t a white cube you have to follow it around
Insides of the body, cavity the way systems flow through the body
A colourful mri scan
The piece changes depending on where you stand as the entire wall is used – the scale is that the entire wall is a canvas
The colours are vivacious and lively the different tones and shades make it imperfect like all living things
Micro – enlarged microscopic structures and macro – landscape
Imperfection – the drip and chance, deliberate marks and allowed the medium to speak for itself
Wind currents and energy blue leads in like a murmuration – starling
Scale is very effective
Confident use of materials and engagement with the architecture of space
Similarity between congruous and this one but this has more confidence
Tactile and makes me want to touch it – follow it around and touch it with the hands
A lot of white currently – evokes a particular feeling and reading – less white would make it feel different
Tactility of the mark making – trace it as a feeling compelled the audience to want to experience it
Surrounded by a hug extracted from reality and placed into a space that has been created
Exciting
I do not stop at the end of a surface i carry it around a corner where does it go ?
Simple and elegant way to draw the viewer in
Done through the physicality rather than the aesthetic. Awareness of colour and mark making
Performance drawing Matthew barney drawing restraint
Imagine the motion of the hand that is required to make the marks traces of movement
Frances Elise railings stick walking around a square in London metal fence noise
Stating that I’m there in a transient way Japanese painters, Jackson pollack, calligraphic, Carolee schneeman hair on the wall to mark make
Great documentation gives a real sense of the space
Undulating and ethereal
Permanent ephemeral feeling it can vanish touch it before it goes
Squiggle away like a wisp or sprite
Pigment is used more in one side then the outside fades away into the wall itself
Fish shoals and herring moving in schools then disappear
Time lapse video
Oscar fissinger animation
Meaning – life and being alive
Poetry of line and colour
27/05/2021 – I really enjoyed this crit with the L5’s. I found the idea of using a time lapse interesting, and i gave it a shot. However i found after filming myself for half an hour that I work very erratically, moving all over the place so much of the shot was of me moving around or I was hidden behind a wall. I might use some of this on my social media platforms as documentation though.
